Week 8B

WEDNESDAY

This class was spent to go over and critique the artifacts the students who choose to create a design element instead of a written document. I choose to create a book to present my case study. By creating a book it's something the Admissions Department could reference and hold, while they were on the computer going through my suggestions. I only had a few of my pages laid out. Below is a list of the comments I received during the critique. I tried to take in considerations all the comments into my design.

• Take higher quality pictures. 
• Consider making the text one block instead of two columns under "Project Guidelines"
• Under "Set up" change privacy to private. 
• Good use of images and iconography, continue this concept throughout the book.
• Under "Target Users" correct willingly to participate.
• Consider making the blue type a bit darker. 
• Repeat shapes
• Good composition, especially on the "Table of Contents" spread.
• On "Moderated Usability testing, this is a lot of tension under the body copy. Maybe increase the size here. 
• Keep text in past tense instead of present. 
• Make sure definitions are correct under usability testing. 
• Line up text. 
• Make the clock hands curved instead of square.